change in plot narrative

1. 1. Tracking shot of the detective walking into his office
2. A mid shot of the detective hanging up his hat and his jacket
3. See a desk with an ashtray, some cigars, papers…
4. Close up on what’s on the desk papers saying top secret
5. Silhouette of Man In the corner smoking billowing puffs of smoke
6. Man walks to the desk and picks up a fountain pen and a paper pad
7. Man writes on piece of paper with a fountain pen
8. Close up on the message he writes, “let the sleeping dogs lie”
9. Hear a voice saying, “I need to see Mr carter”
10. We see the detective’s reaction to the femme fatales voice
11. Femme fatale bursts into the office
12. She’s says “I know what happened to Freddie you will pay” she is frame with a low angle shot
13. Over the shoulder high angle shot showing the detective
14. She pulls a gun out
15. He gets shot in the head
16. High angle shot of the dead detective
17. Secretary runs in “what happened to Johnny”
18. Over the shoulder shot looking at the secretary
19. Femme fatale goes out the office
20. A medium close up of the secretary taking the pulse of the detective